Thank you to Johnelle DeWitt for encouraging me to write something for the 4th Annual Halloweensie Writing Contest.
Yes, I said writing contest.
As most of you know, I’m an illustrator but I would also like to write someday so I gave it a go. It’s the first work of fiction I’ve finished in close to 20 years (and the rest have never seen the light of day).
Here are the rules: Write a 100 word Halloween story appropriate for children (title not included in the 100 words), using the words pumpkin, broomstick, and creak.
Edit November 6th, 2014:
YIKES! I am doing the little happy dance and having a “Sally Field” moment here… My entry won an Honorable Mention! Motivation has been kick-started.
Thank you, Susanna Leonard Hill, for creating a lot of fun, inspiration, and camaraderie! And now, for giving me a good kick in the writing trousers.
Here is my entry:
The Poag’s Revenge
How the Pumpkin Poag took his revenge that howling night was frightening,
Swirling creaking, shrieking gales in streaks of greenish lightning.
As shingles, branches, baubles blew, we cowered in our room,
Certain our prized Jack-o-Lantern surely brought this doom.
Dragging rakes and broomsticks, creeping out at palest dawn,
We gazed upon the chaos littering the lawn.
Indeed, our gorgeous pumpkin was smashed across the ground,
And scrawled in dusty sidewalk chalk this angry screed we found:
“Next time you trespass in my patch for magic gourds to find,
My shimmering, dazzling, glimmering home, you had better leave behind!â€
By the way, Mr. Poag should also be making a VISUAL appearance later this year… stay tuned.
Johnell
10/27/2014 @ 1:55 pm
Wow. You were hard at work last night. Love the final. Can’t wait to see the visual. Good luck and well done!
Cheryl Secomb
10/27/2014 @ 2:03 pm
Wow, terrific story in rhyme, Mishka! Such a creepy and fun Halloweenish tale. Well done!
Mishka
10/27/2014 @ 3:55 pm
Thank you, Cheryl!
Wendy Greenley
10/27/2014 @ 4:29 pm
Next time I head into the pumpkin field I’m going to be looking over my shoulder. Spooky story!
Mishka
11/2/2014 @ 9:01 pm
Thank you, Wendy!
Clarbojahn
10/27/2014 @ 4:46 pm
Super good job, Miska. Love the imagery. And word choice. 🙂
Mishka
10/30/2014 @ 10:25 am
Thank you, Clar!
Carol
10/27/2014 @ 5:51 pm
Really scary!
Janet Smart
10/27/2014 @ 7:27 pm
Good story. Love your descriptive words.
Mishka
11/2/2014 @ 9:02 pm
Thank you, Janet!
Lauri Meyers
10/27/2014 @ 9:08 pm
Very nice Mishka. You could tell they were scared because they knew they had done something naughty! good tension.
Mishka
11/2/2014 @ 9:03 pm
Thanks, Lauri!
Penny Parker Klostermann
10/27/2014 @ 9:59 pm
I love that the message was left in dusty sidewalk chalk! Nice Halloweensie story!
Mishka
10/28/2014 @ 9:32 am
Thank you, Penny!
Cecilia
10/28/2014 @ 3:42 am
this was worth waiting 20 years for 🙂 I will come back to see a visual of Mr Poag.
Mishka
10/28/2014 @ 9:21 am
Wow. Thank you, Cecilia! I hope this kick-starts more and better.
Carrie Finison
10/28/2014 @ 9:41 am
Oooh – don’t make that Pumpkin Poag angry! He taught them a lesson. I enjoyed this story, Mishka!
Mishka
10/30/2014 @ 10:27 am
Yes, he’s usually a little nicer. Thanks, Carrie!
Rupali
10/28/2014 @ 11:31 am
What spooky scary chaos in so few words. Hard to believe your other writing never saw the light of the day 🙂
What fun to be able to add pictures of this too. Great story ! Thanks for sharing!
Mishka
11/2/2014 @ 9:38 pm
Rupali, thank you very much! It’s not so hard to believe, my old writing is neither finished nor particularly good. I’ve been learning a lot these last few years.
Teresa MI Schaefer
10/28/2014 @ 9:01 pm
Spine tingling! Can’t wait to see wait Mr. Pong looks like.
Mishka
11/2/2014 @ 9:38 pm
Thanks, Teresa!
Susanna Leonard Hill
10/28/2014 @ 10:01 pm
Holy smoke, Mishka! For someone who doesn’t call themselves a writer, that’s a darn good story and poem! I’m looking forward to the illustration! I do not think I’d want to be on that Poag’s bad side! Thanks so much for coming out of the writer closet for the Halloweensie Contest and joining in the fun! 🙂
Mishka
10/28/2014 @ 10:48 pm
Thank you, Susanna! And thank you for hosting the competition. I was at the MidAtlantic SCBWI conference over the weekend so I had a few good kicks and specific people to thank for them. 🙂
Rachel
10/28/2014 @ 11:16 pm
I loved your rhyming story Mishka. Spooky!
Mishka
11/2/2014 @ 9:39 pm
Thank you, Rachel!
Linda Boyden
10/29/2014 @ 10:27 am
Lovely images! And I didn’t know the word, poag! Well done!
Mishka
10/29/2014 @ 10:35 am
Thank you, Linda. I invented the Poag. He’s rather like a goblin but I wanted to invent a new critter. Poag is a slang word, mostly a derogatory military acronym. I decided it was worth the risk to use it.
Cathy Mealey
10/29/2014 @ 10:40 am
Yikes! Now I know who to blame on the morning after Halloween! Does Poag also toss eggs and drape tree branches with toilet paper? Scary fun!
Mishka
11/2/2014 @ 9:42 pm
Thanks, Cathy! I am not sure about the toilet paper, but probably the eggs may be blamed on the Poag. I hope he stayed away from your house Friday night and you had a great Halloween!
Catherine Johnson
10/29/2014 @ 11:19 am
Spooktacular!
Mishka
11/2/2014 @ 9:42 pm
Thank you, Catherine!
Buffy Silverman
10/29/2014 @ 2:30 pm
I think they”ll steer clear of Pumpkin Poag from now on! Fun story, Mishka.
Jean
10/29/2014 @ 9:15 pm
Angry screeds written in sidewalk chalk…I wouldn’t mess with that Poag! Great story.
Christie Allred
10/30/2014 @ 4:59 pm
Woo, scary! I like the ending a lot. Tell me, what is a poag?
Mishka
10/30/2014 @ 5:52 pm
Thanks, Christie! I actually invented the Poag. He’s rather like a goblin but I wanted to invent a special sprite who lives in a pumpkin patch.
Carrie Charley Brown
10/30/2014 @ 11:27 pm
Cool to break a 20 year spell and face your writing-you did well! 🙂
Mishka
11/2/2014 @ 8:59 pm
Haha! Thank you so much, Carrie!
Diane Tulloch
10/31/2014 @ 8:53 pm
Wow! And you said this is the first writing you’ve done in 20 years. So glad you joined in this fun competition.
Mishka
11/2/2014 @ 9:01 pm
Well, the first real writing worth anything. I’m hoping this competition was a good kick-start. Thank you so much, Diane!
Erik - TKRB
11/4/2014 @ 5:31 pm
Cool story! 😀
Mishka
11/6/2014 @ 11:18 pm
Thanks, Erik! I’m glad to know a bona fide kid likes my story too! 🙂