Thank you to Johnelle DeWitt for encouraging me to write something for the 4th Annual Halloweensie Writing Contest.
Yes, I said writing contest.
As most of you know, I’m an illustrator but I would also like to write someday so I gave it a go. It’s the first work of fiction I’ve finished in close to 20 years (and the rest have never seen the light of day).
Here are the rules: Write a 100 word Halloween story appropriate for children (title not included in the 100 words), using the words pumpkin, broomstick, and creak.
Edit November 6th, 2014:
YIKES! I am doing the little happy dance and having a “Sally Field” moment here… My entry won an Honorable Mention! Motivation has been kick-started.
Thank you, Susanna Leonard Hill, for creating a lot of fun, inspiration, and camaraderie! And now, for giving me a good kick in the writing trousers.
Here is my entry:
The Poag’s Revenge
How the Pumpkin Poag took his revenge that howling night was frightening,
Swirling creaking, shrieking gales in streaks of greenish lightning.
As shingles, branches, baubles blew, we cowered in our room,
Certain our prized Jack-o-Lantern surely brought this doom.
Dragging rakes and broomsticks, creeping out at palest dawn,
We gazed upon the chaos littering the lawn.
Indeed, our gorgeous pumpkin was smashed across the ground,
And scrawled in dusty sidewalk chalk this angry screed we found:
Next time you trespass in my patch for magic gourds to find,
My shimmering, dazzling, glimmering home, you had better leave behind!
By the way, Mr. Poag should also be making a VISUAL appearance later this year… stay tuned.
10/27/2014 @ 1:55 pm
Wow. You were hard at work last night. Love the final. Can’t wait to see the visual. Good luck and well done!
10/27/2014 @ 2:03 pm
Wow, terrific story in rhyme, Mishka! Such a creepy and fun Halloweenish tale. Well done!
10/27/2014 @ 3:55 pm
Thank you, Cheryl!
10/27/2014 @ 4:29 pm
Next time I head into the pumpkin field I’m going to be looking over my shoulder. Spooky story!
11/2/2014 @ 9:01 pm
Thank you, Wendy!
10/27/2014 @ 4:46 pm
Super good job, Miska. Love the imagery. And word choice. 🙂
10/30/2014 @ 10:25 am
Thank you, Clar!
10/27/2014 @ 5:51 pm
Really scary!
10/27/2014 @ 7:27 pm
Good story. Love your descriptive words.
11/2/2014 @ 9:02 pm
Thank you, Janet!
10/27/2014 @ 9:08 pm
Very nice Mishka. You could tell they were scared because they knew they had done something naughty! good tension.
11/2/2014 @ 9:03 pm
Thanks, Lauri!
10/27/2014 @ 9:59 pm
I love that the message was left in dusty sidewalk chalk! Nice Halloweensie story!
10/28/2014 @ 9:32 am
Thank you, Penny!
10/28/2014 @ 3:42 am
this was worth waiting 20 years for 🙂 I will come back to see a visual of Mr Poag.
10/28/2014 @ 9:21 am
Wow. Thank you, Cecilia! I hope this kick-starts more and better.
10/28/2014 @ 9:41 am
Oooh – don’t make that Pumpkin Poag angry! He taught them a lesson. I enjoyed this story, Mishka!
10/30/2014 @ 10:27 am
Yes, he’s usually a little nicer. Thanks, Carrie!
10/28/2014 @ 11:31 am
What spooky scary chaos in so few words. Hard to believe your other writing never saw the light of the day 🙂
What fun to be able to add pictures of this too. Great story ! Thanks for sharing!
11/2/2014 @ 9:38 pm
Rupali, thank you very much! It’s not so hard to believe, my old writing is neither finished nor particularly good. I’ve been learning a lot these last few years.
10/28/2014 @ 9:01 pm
Spine tingling! Can’t wait to see wait Mr. Pong looks like.
11/2/2014 @ 9:38 pm
Thanks, Teresa!
10/28/2014 @ 10:01 pm
Holy smoke, Mishka! For someone who doesn’t call themselves a writer, that’s a darn good story and poem! I’m looking forward to the illustration! I do not think I’d want to be on that Poag’s bad side! Thanks so much for coming out of the writer closet for the Halloweensie Contest and joining in the fun! 🙂
10/28/2014 @ 10:48 pm
Thank you, Susanna! And thank you for hosting the competition. I was at the MidAtlantic SCBWI conference over the weekend so I had a few good kicks and specific people to thank for them. 🙂
10/28/2014 @ 11:16 pm
I loved your rhyming story Mishka. Spooky!
11/2/2014 @ 9:39 pm
Thank you, Rachel!
10/29/2014 @ 10:27 am
Lovely images! And I didn’t know the word, poag! Well done!
10/29/2014 @ 10:35 am
Thank you, Linda. I invented the Poag. He’s rather like a goblin but I wanted to invent a new critter. Poag is a slang word, mostly a derogatory military acronym. I decided it was worth the risk to use it.
10/29/2014 @ 10:40 am
Yikes! Now I know who to blame on the morning after Halloween! Does Poag also toss eggs and drape tree branches with toilet paper? Scary fun!
11/2/2014 @ 9:42 pm
Thanks, Cathy! I am not sure about the toilet paper, but probably the eggs may be blamed on the Poag. I hope he stayed away from your house Friday night and you had a great Halloween!
10/29/2014 @ 11:19 am
Spooktacular!
11/2/2014 @ 9:42 pm
Thank you, Catherine!
10/29/2014 @ 2:30 pm
I think they”ll steer clear of Pumpkin Poag from now on! Fun story, Mishka.
10/29/2014 @ 9:15 pm
Angry screeds written in sidewalk chalk…I wouldn’t mess with that Poag! Great story.
10/30/2014 @ 4:59 pm
Woo, scary! I like the ending a lot. Tell me, what is a poag?
10/30/2014 @ 5:52 pm
Thanks, Christie! I actually invented the Poag. He’s rather like a goblin but I wanted to invent a special sprite who lives in a pumpkin patch.
10/30/2014 @ 11:27 pm
Cool to break a 20 year spell and face your writing-you did well! 🙂
11/2/2014 @ 8:59 pm
Haha! Thank you so much, Carrie!
10/31/2014 @ 8:53 pm
Wow! And you said this is the first writing you’ve done in 20 years. So glad you joined in this fun competition.
11/2/2014 @ 9:01 pm
Well, the first real writing worth anything. I’m hoping this competition was a good kick-start. Thank you so much, Diane!
11/4/2014 @ 5:31 pm
Cool story! 😀
11/6/2014 @ 11:18 pm
Thanks, Erik! I’m glad to know a bona fide kid likes my story too! 🙂